LANDING PAGE ROAST

I'll Tell You Exactly Why Your Landing Page Isn't Converting for $100.

Want an Expert Copywriter to Unlock Your Website's 2025 Revenue Potential?

If my roast doesn't give you at least 3 changes you can act on immediately, I'll refund your $100. All I ask is you tell me why so I can do better next time.

Book My Roast

Most landing pages bleed leads and the business owner has no idea why. Bad headline. Weak offer. Confusing layout. Or all three.

For $100, I'll screen-record myself going through your landing page and tell you what's working, what isn't, and what I'd do differently. Get honest feedback from a copywriter who's been writing and building B2B websites since 2016.

Here's what you get:

Here's you can expect:

  1. A Messaging Audit —I'll evaluate your website copy to ensure it speaks to the right audience, drives engagement, and aligns with your business goals.
  2. Design Insights — Suggestions to improve the visual flow and usability of your website to keep visitors engaged longer.
  3. Optimization Opportunities — I'll identify specific areas where your website could convert more visitors into leads or sales.
  4. Actionable Checklist — In addition to the video, you'll receive a clear, one-page summary of recommended changes you can implement yourself (or hire me to do for you).
  1. A Messaging Audit — Is your copy speaking to the right person? Does it make them want to act? I'll tell you where it lands and where it falls flat.
  2. Design Insights — I'll call out anything in your layout, hierarchy, or UX that's getting in the way of conversions.
  3. Optimization Opportunities — Specific areas where small changes could turn more visitors into leads or sales.
  4. Actionable Checklist — A clear, prioritized checklist of recommended changes. Implement them yourself (or hire me to do for you).

If you like what you receive, and we’re a good fit, we can discuss how I can help take your website to the next level. If not, the plan is yours to keep—no strings attached.

If you like what you receive, and we’re a good fit, we can discuss how I can help take your website to the next level. If not, the plan is yours to keep—no strings attached.

Expert Video Review

I'll record a 15–20 minute screen-share where I walk through your landing page and tell you exactly what's working, what's not, and what I'd change.

Messaging & Conversion Fixes

Specific changes to your headline, offer, layout, and CTAs — focused on turning more visitors into leads. Whether you're running ads or trying to rank, I'll show you what's holding the page back.

Actionable Checklist

You get a prioritized checklist of everything I found, ready to hand to your developer or implement yourself.